View Full Version : My new stop motion starring master chief
djdspartan
09-03-2008, 07:03 PM
my 3rd stopmotion ( I know that my fingers are seen in the movie )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ybMqWnofqzk
blurry in some places, practing not moving the camera and using clay for bullets in this 1.
plz tell me how you think it is:)
nightmare alien
09-03-2008, 07:36 PM
It's okay, but it still begs the question....
HOW OLD ARE YOU?!?!?!
magman3
09-03-2008, 07:37 PM
Gotta get your hands out of the video!
djdspartan
09-03-2008, 07:39 PM
Gotta get your hands out of the video!
i know i know sorry bout that lol
Nemestrokus
09-03-2008, 08:20 PM
It's okay, but it still begs the question....
HOW OLD ARE YOU?!?!?!
It's better than your first one FOR SURE.
Look at his other vids. Judging by his voice he's pretty young.
bdubz420
09-03-2008, 08:29 PM
cool carrot shooter. I want one
Trunks3540
09-03-2008, 08:32 PM
That one wasn't that bad, cept for the fingers and it was kinda cheesy. I could see the string on the green ball. But it wasn't horrible.
Dr.Deadman
09-03-2008, 08:33 PM
liked the fingers!
IxSL4Y4xI
09-03-2008, 08:35 PM
It's improving, slowly but surely :)
Battlefield
09-03-2008, 09:08 PM
Dude very bad. I could see your hands and the string holding the plasma and you still need sound!
smokingun
09-03-2008, 09:15 PM
love the plasma ball!
you need one thing:
a tripod. it will seriously make it THAT much better.
good work tho they get better and better everytime!
Saurian
09-03-2008, 09:19 PM
yes a tripod, its very simple, get a REALLY small stand, or try Legos, i have a ****-ton and they do very nicely for posing
Spanky2324
09-03-2008, 09:19 PM
Much better then the first one. Your improving you just gotta work on the camera being more focused and no more fingers. Sound effects would be nice too.
aelam
09-03-2008, 10:07 PM
Find the little flower icon on your camera and use it.
nightmare alien
09-04-2008, 12:41 AM
Look at his other vids. Judging by his voice he's pretty young.
My speakers are broken. :(
Hemostrat
09-04-2008, 12:59 AM
It looked like MC was break dancing lol
djdspartan
09-04-2008, 02:08 PM
cool carrot shooter. I want one
ahh lol
MarioBro7
09-04-2008, 02:24 PM
Ok, getting better, but keep the camera still, and focus it!
Joerhyno
09-04-2008, 02:28 PM
Dude very bad. I could see your hands and the string holding the plasma and you still need sound!
lol.. you're kidding, right?
I think you're getting a lot better, far better than I would have the time to put into, maybe for a Bday, or Xmas, ask for a tripod.. and a better camera ;)
djdspartan
09-04-2008, 02:42 PM
me and my carrot shotter will try again and again with hopes to get better * dramatic superhero music plays*
Bulldozer36
09-04-2008, 02:46 PM
That is already infinitely better than the first one. Good job little man, keep it up.
bdubz420
09-04-2008, 03:23 PM
Yeah man definitely better. Everyone has to start somewhere.
djdspartan
09-04-2008, 04:07 PM
That is already infinitely better than the first one. Good job little man, keep it up.
thanks i will keep making them and hopefully they do get better and better
although i think I am going to wait till i get my elte to make the next one not sure yet
Joosep
09-04-2008, 04:23 PM
Terrible man...
YOU ARE STILL MOVING THE CAMERA :|
And as for the clay bullets thing...
No... Just... No.
If you want to add effects, muzzle flash, blood spray etc. Use a proper video editing program for christs sakes!
djdspartan
09-04-2008, 04:27 PM
Terrible man...
YOU ARE STILL MOVING THE CAMERA :|
And as for the clay bullets thing...
No... Just... No.
If you want to add effects, muzzle flash, blood spray etc. Use a proper video editing program for christs sakes!
mr. negative,
where can I go for free to get a "proper" editing program???
homunculus
09-04-2008, 04:36 PM
That is already infinitely better than the first one. Good job little man, keep it up.
Agreed. It's not fine cinema or anything, but you're definitely improving, and that's kinda the point. Like somebody said before me- everybody starts somewhere.
djdspartan
09-05-2008, 08:55 AM
Hurricane is a comin 2day :(
Joosep
09-05-2008, 10:27 AM
Download sony vegas from a torrent or something.
EndIessRAlN
09-05-2008, 10:30 AM
FOCUS FOCUS!!! I thought the part where MC got hit with the grenade was pretty funny; IT just floats towards him slowly hanging on a string and then splat like a paintball. Hahahaha.
penutbuttrbandt
09-05-2008, 11:26 AM
these are definately gettin better...i do not have the time nor the patience to sit down and do it...just keep it up bud....you will get better and always listen to peoples tips....my taking photo ability has improved vastly just from suggestions here on the board.....add a little sound and these could be pretty entertaining...may i also suggest that you try to drop all your films in one post....that way they are easier to find...and dont really clog the boards
djdspartan
09-05-2008, 12:41 PM
Download sony vegas from a torrent or something.
torrent???
djdspartan
09-05-2008, 03:24 PM
how do I add effecs and sounds?????
IxSL4Y4xI
09-05-2008, 03:32 PM
how do I add effecs and sounds?????
For sound you can look for different sound files on the internet and download them. Once you have them you need a movie making program with allows you to add sound (I use Microsoft Movie Maker). Some sound files need to be changed too WAV from MP3 too by the way - if you need to do that use audacity. It is a free audio program (google it and it should be easy to find).
For special effects there are a couple of things you can do. You can take the photos you want to edit and put them in paint and edit it there frame by frame. Or you could use a special effects program (like Adobe After Effects). NOTE - there aren't many good free special effect software on the web.
Hope I could help. :)
djdspartan
09-05-2008, 03:43 PM
I found one I am trying out thanks
Viking Spawn
09-06-2008, 03:03 AM
Much, much better! Keep going at it! I like it! ;)
SoulRedeemer
09-06-2008, 03:17 AM
I'll have to watch your others, but seeing that this is your third production, not bad. You're completely aware of what you need to improve on, so I'll spare you of the "sage advice." Keep it up man. Would love to continue watching your progress in this fascinating endeavor of yours. :)
Joosep
09-06-2008, 06:56 AM
You can take the photos you want to edit and put them in paint and edit it there frame by frame. Or you could use a special effects program (like Adobe After Effects). NOTE - there aren't many good free special effect software on the web.
Do NOT use paint :| Seriously, it looks awful. Also, if you don't know what a torrent is... Then I'm not sure whether or not I can even discuss this here. Basicly, if you want to find out, use google, download bit torrent, and find a torrent for the program you want.
spectre_I
09-06-2008, 11:01 AM
that was awesome, i even like the fingers in it.
but the no tripod was irritating. and the out of focus was unnacceptable.
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